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Hey everyone! I'm a Master willing to help analyze players' games for free. Is anyone interested?

@Underkkover Oh, it looks like you send me multiple games all within the same post. Could you format the game you want me to look at with the comments inside the lichess viewer? It's hard to parse through all the text :)
@UrShak It's hard to criticize any of white's play this game...are you black here and looking fo where things went wrong, or just showing off a win?

In the future, make sure you annotate your games before presenting them for analysis :).
@BlakeyBChess
OK master, thanks for the comment. I heard you. What do you say about this game? I won, but I feel that my opening game was pretty bad. I blundere a pawn, but managed to equalize the game, but then I was overplayed. What are my weaknesses?

[Event "Rated Blitz game"] [Site "lichess.org/pxlQtWNq"] [Date "2019.04.30"] [Round "-"] [White "UrShak"] [Black "anakmedan2555"] [Result "1-0"] [UTCDate "2019.04.30"] [UTCTime "15:37:50"] [WhiteElo "1780"] [BlackElo "1888"] [WhiteRatingDiff "+14"] [BlackRatingDiff "-14"] [Variant "Standard"] [TimeControl "180+0"] [ECO "C44"] [Opening "Ponziani Opening"] [Termination "Time forfeit"] [Annotator "lichess.org"] 1. e4 e5 2. Nf3 Nc6 3. c3 { C44 Ponziani Opening } Bc5?! { (0.00 → 0.88) Inaccuracy. Best move was d5. } (3... d5 4. Qa4 f6 5. d3 Ne7 6. Nbd2 a6 7. d4 exd4 8. Nxd4) 4. d4 exd4 5. cxd4 Bb4+ 6. Nc3 d6?! { (0.91 → 1.50) Inaccuracy. Best move was Nf6. } (6... Nf6 7. Bd3 d5 8. e5 Ne4 9. Qc2 Bg4 10. Be3 f5 11. a3) 7. d5 Nce7?? { (1.41 → 5.28) Blunder. Best move was Bxc3+. } (7... Bxc3+ 8. bxc3 Nb8 9. Bc4 Nd7 10. O-O Ne7 11. Nd4 O-O 12. Re1) 8. Qb3?? { (5.28 → 1.37) Blunder. Best move was Qa4+. } (8. Qa4+ Nc6) 8... Bc5 9. Na4 Bb6 10. Nxb6 axb6 11. Be3 Nf6 12. Bb5+?! { (1.00 → 0.34) Inaccuracy. Best move was Bd3. } (12. Bd3 Ng6) 12... Bd7 13. Bd3 O-O 14. h3 Ng6 15. O-O Ne5? { (0.18 → 1.55) Mistake. Best move was Re8. } (15... Re8) 16. Nxe5 dxe5 17. d6? { (1.70 → 0.20) Mistake. Best move was a4. } (17. a4 Qe7) 17... c5? { (0.20 → 1.60) Mistake. Best move was cxd6. } (17... cxd6 18. Bxb6 Qe7 19. a4 Bc6 20. Qb4 Nh5 21. Rfd1 Nf4 22. Kh2 Qe6 23. Bf1 d5 24. g3) 18. f3? { (1.60 → -0.24) Mistake. Best move was f4. } (18. f4) 18... Be6 19. Bc4 Qxd6 20. Bxe6 fxe6 21. Rad1 Qe7? { (0.00 → 1.47) Mistake. Best move was Qc6. } (21... Qc6 22. Qc3 Qc7 23. Qb3) 22. Rd2 Rfd8?! { (1.28 → 1.98) Inaccuracy. Best move was Rfc8. } (22... Rfc8) 23. Rfd1? { (1.98 → 0.62) Mistake. Best move was Rxd8+. } (23. Rxd8+ Qxd8) 23... Rxd2 24. Rxd2 Nd7?! { (0.86 → 1.45) Inaccuracy. Best move was Ra6. } (24... Ra6) 25. Qb5 Nf6 26. a3? { (1.77 → 0.10) Mistake. Best move was Qxb6. } (26. Qxb6 Rxa2 27. Bxc5 Nd7 28. Bxe7 Nxb6 29. Rc2 Ra1+ 30. Kf2 Rd1 31. Bc5 Na4 32. Ke3 Nxc5) 26... Ra6? { (0.10 → 1.21) Mistake. Best move was Qc7. } (26... Qc7 27. a4) 27. b4? { (1.21 → 0.00) Mistake. Best move was Bg5. } (27. Bg5 Kf7 28. Bxf6 Kxf6 29. f4 Ra5 30. fxe5+ Kg6 31. Qd3 Ra4 32. Qd6 Qe8 33. Rd3 Rd4) 27... cxb4? { (0.00 → 1.25) Mistake. Best move was Rxa3. } (27... Rxa3 28. Bf2 Rb3 29. Qxb6 Rxb4 30. Qd8+ Qxd8 31. Rxd8+ Kf7 32. Bxc5 Rb1+ 33. Kh2 b5 34. Rb8) 28. axb4 Ne8? { (1.14 → 3.65) Mistake. Best move was Qc7. } (28... Qc7 29. Kh2) 29. Rd7? { (3.65 → 2.51) Mistake. Best move was Bg5. } (29. Bg5) 29... Qh4?? { (2.51 → 5.55) Blunder. Best move was Nd6. } (29... Nd6 30. Rxe7 Nxb5 31. Rxe6 Na3 32. Re8+ Kf7 33. Rxe5 Nc2 34. Bd2 Ra2 35. Rd5 Ke8 36. Kh2) 30. Bf2?? { (5.55 → 2.46) Blunder. Best move was Qxe5. } (30. Qxe5) 30... Ra1+? { (2.46 → 3.95) Mistake. Best move was Qf4. } (30... Qf4 31. Rd1) 31. Kh2 Qxf2?? { (4.00 → 16.25) Blunder. Best move was Qf4+. } (31... Qf4+ 32. Bg3 Qe3 33. Bxe5 Qg1+ 34. Kg3 Qe1+ 35. Kg4 Qf1 36. Qxf1 Rxf1 37. Rxb7 Nf6+ 38. Kf4) 32. Rd1?? { (16.25 → -2.78) Blunder. Best move was Rd8. } (32. Rd8 Kf7 33. Qxe8+ Kf6 34. Qg8 Rh1+ 35. Kxh1 Qe1+ 36. Kh2 Qxb4 37. Rd7 Qe7 38. Rxe7 Kxe7) 32... Ra8 33. Qd7? { (-2.26 → -4.14) Mistake. Best move was Qxe5. } (33. Qxe5) 33... Qe3? { (-4.14 → -1.62) Mistake. Best move was Kf8. } (33... Kf8 34. Qxe6 Ra2 35. Rg1 Rc2 36. Qf5+ Nf6 37. Qxe5 Qxf3 38. Qb8+ Ke7 39. Qxb7+ Nd7 40. Kh1) 34. Qxe6+ Kf8 35. Qf5+? { (-1.64 → -2.69) Mistake. Best move was Qxe5. } (35. Qxe5 Nf6 36. Qd6+ Kg8 37. e5 Qf4+ 38. Kg1 Ne8 39. Qe6+ Qf7 40. Qxb6 Qb3 41. Rd7 Qc4) 35... Kg8? { (-2.69 → -1.64) Mistake. Best move was Nf6. } (35... Nf6 36. Qxe5) 36. Rd7? { (-1.64 → -3.69) Mistake. Best move was Qxe5. } (36. Qxe5 Nf6 37. Qe7 h6 38. Qxb7 Re8 39. Qc7 Nh5 40. Qc6 Re5 41. Qg6 Qf4+ 42. Kg1 Qf6) 36... Qf4+ 37. Qxf4 exf4 38. Rxb7 Ra4? { (-3.41 → -1.92) Mistake. Best move was Nd6. } (38... Nd6 39. Rxb6 Nc4 40. Rc6 Ne3 41. b5 Ra2 42. b6 Rxg2+ 43. Kh1 Rb2 44. Kg1 h5 45. Rc8+) 39. Rxb6 Nf6 40. e5? { (-1.68 → -3.09) Mistake. Best move was Rb8+. } (40. Rb8+ Kf7 41. Rb7+ Kf8 42. h4 h5 43. b5 Rb4 44. b6 Rb3 45. Kg1 Rb2 46. Kf1 g6) 40... Kf7?? { (-3.09 → 1.43) Blunder. Best move was Nd7. } (40... Nd7) 41. exf6 { White wins on time. } 1-0
It still looks like all of this is computer analysis. Could I see your move-by-move comments (preferably integrated into the analysis board, not posted as plaintext below?)
Here are the games from my latest tournament, the national championships.
He came on Lichess to give you help to analyze games. He asks you to show one of your games annotated in this goal and you are all to send him many games that you won, without any comments etc.

Everyone has already won a game. And I think that he doesn't care about the fact that you won a game three weeks ago.

Why you don't prefer to take a long game that you play seriously (instead of bullet/blitz) thinking about all your moves, you put some comments on it to explain what was your idea, your plan etc. and you post it. Like that it will be useful for everyone.

When someone give you his hand, don't ask for the arm.

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