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Look at this painting, I have created

I have already created another thread about this but this is just too beautiful for people do not see it,
I think I have all the tactics right, the position is amazing
Its very beautiful unless I am missing something, It does look beautiful, the thing is that I am sleepy so I would like a strong player to affirm whether my painting is right, or I have missed something, just look at it and tell me ur opinion.
http://en.lichess.org/editor/r1q2k2/2R1N3/2r1PPB1/B3bPP1/2n1n3/8/KPb3P1/N3Q2R%20b%20-%20-%200%201
Black to play.
Sorry I posted a bad picture, I have a tendency to hurry always,
this seems to be fine now
its not messy but its fine, u cant have everything in one picture.
this is the picture (Black to play)
lichess.org/editor/r1q2k2/5B2/2rbPP2/B2P2P1/2n1n3/8/KPb1P2R/N3Q2R_b_-_-
and this is the solution
http://en.lichess.org/HHJBqMQZ/black#0
Its kind of easy
But I found composing is much harder richer and more fulfilling than solving, I prefer it, its more demanding u have to think about everything, its almost like playing a game but without time pressure, so try as well u may like it, that was my first composition.
I like the freedom of it, u have both colours to choose whatever u like, so u have more power of expression, more pieces to work with, I enjoyed,
so maybe other day i do other one, ok, see u, bye.
I don't believe it's sound. Have you plugged it into an engine yet? Your solution makes a lot of assumptions as far as I can tell without seeing all the variations. For instance, BxN isn't forced.
Anybody can get stockfish for free and there are a lot of free guis out there.
Blitzin is good. You can get it through ICC. But if that doesn't work for you, there are a lot of others.
it's sound , check it with engine, yes BxN is not forced , but the only move available instead is QxN, otherwise the black king will be mated in 1
I just looked at your profile and can see that you did run it against the server stock fish. So, to answer your question, yes, it is pretty but you don't need us to tell you it's sound. The only real suggestion I would make if you want to be a composer is to stand behind your work with more confidence. Let people assume you already proofed it and challenge them to solve it, not check it for you. That approach is somewhat deceptive considering you've already run it against an engine. Try offering a clue like "white to play and draw." And I still would recommend as an extra layer of confidence, get your own engine and let it sit on the position for 10 - 30 minutes before you decide that's it's 100% and also play through it and figure out all the possible variations so you know how to reply to the unforced moves to prove that they are forced. Get me?
wow, there are always people who try to put one down.. motion didn't admit that he is a great composer (yet he composed a great one !) he kept trying until it worked, even he shared it with us to discuss it before that, so I dont't see what's wrong with this
man the engine is false, thats why i ask people
cause the engine makes mistakes
but anyway that was about other puzzle other day, relax, im just sharing the time a little here, i like the mess in general, if u dont enjoy it dont read my posts, if i post a puzzle which is fine then its boring, much better to post uncomplete stuff, errors and try to find something together but whatever.
i like to share the experience, not just the solution, to make it more real and to tell others that they can compose as well if they want, ciao.
No, the first one is way better than this my friend, as it contains more possibilities

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